inventrix: (scribbling)
inventrix ([personal profile] inventrix) wrote in [personal profile] becka_sutton 2012-01-20 01:32 am (UTC)

*tsks* You want comments, here are my comments.

You need to stop talking yourself down so much! Present the story and let the readers judge for themselves.

The story is good! It needs some grammatical polishing, but that is pretty much it.

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