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2018-02-22 07:27 pm

Thimbleful Thursday Fic - Groundfall

My attempt at this week's Thimbleful Thursday Prompt. Unedited and unpolished as I literally just wrote it. Set in my prompt world Afeli.

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Sila needed to get the Swan of Heaven out of this storm before it tore the balloon or blew out the essence engines. Curse the ground dwelling weather worker who'd summoned it. Why couldn't they just let it rain or not where nature intended instead of messing with it. If she could have spared the time she'd have cast a few magefire grenades over the side to destroy the crops they were trying to save.

"We'll have to land, captain!" Her first mate, Anzil, said. "We're not going to make it."

Sila clutched the wheel tighter and tried to ignore him. The nearest Sky Island was half a day's flight away, landing now would mean landing on the Islands below. The ones surround by water not air. The ones that housed the people who had summoned this very storm with no consideration for their sky dwelling neighbours. She couldn't inflict the ground on her crew.

"Captain!" Anzil repeated even as the first essence engine whined and died.

Sila's shoulder's slumped. There was no way they would reach Taril now.

She took a breath. "Prepare for groundfall." She said, the swan's essence system picking up her voice and ensuring the entire crew heard it. "Arm yourselves. Hide." She closed her eyes. "Until this storm clears it's every man for themselves."
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2018-02-08 09:47 pm

Welcome to Afeli - a Prompt based ConWorld

It started yesterday over on my Mastodon Account. I was musing on joining in on #WorldbuidingWednesday and not being sure what to do with it I decided to create a whole new world based on prompts from my Mastopeeps. So I tooted and gave people an hour to prompt me. Mastodon didn't let me down and I ended up with six prompts.
  • Sky Islands and airships (@daHob)
  • Fuzzy reptiles (@Katrani)
  • Easy magic cantrips (@LilFluff)
  • Memory Gems that have to be shattered to extract the memories and which a person can only ever have one (@HerraBre)
  • Animal/Human Paired Shapeshifters and Beastfolk (@zatnosk and I recommend reading the thread he linked me to for his prompt)
  • A critter that has two life stages - one as a plant and one as an animal (@Anke).
So I took these prompts and wove them into the start of a setting in a long chain of toots and I intend to develop Afeli further every Wednesday in the same way. But chains of toots aren't the best way to read the backlog so I needed a place to archive it. Then I remembered I have a Dreamwidth account I hardly use, so here we are.

And so without further ado:

Afeli - A Prompt Based ConWorld
Episode One

 

Afeli is a world of bright skies, sparkling seas and verdant islands. While a few of these islands are large enough to classify as continents none of them are especially large – the largest being a little larger than Australia. Afeli however is also a world of magic which probably explains why some of the islands have been torn from their ocean homes and now float in the sky.

Archipelagos of these Sky Islands are found around the world and all except the smallest of them are inhabited. Some of the people are descended from those who lived there when the magical cataclysm that threw them into the sky happened. Others have found their way there from the surface or are descended from people who did.

Of all the people of Afeli the Sky Islanders are the most technologically sophisticated but lag behind the surface dwellers in magical skill because so much of the ambient magic of their home is tied up in keeping them in the sky leaving less free magic for them to work with.

In spite of this the Sky Islanders have learnt to combine magic with technology to create many wonders. The most extraordinary of which may be their Skyships – ethereal airships which carry passengers and cargo between the Sky Islands or, more rarely, between surface and sky.

Returning to the surface world technological solutions are rarer, not because the peoples of the ground are any less intelligent than the Sky Islanders but because of the abundance of free magic. A niche that magical alternatives won't fill more cleanly and easily than technology is rare. Indeed the surface is so rich in magic that children learn the basic housekeeping cantrips to light a fire, crack an egg, purify water or heal a graze just by watching their parents. More complex magics have to be taught but most people learn a magical trade rather than a mundane one.

One such magical trade is unique to the large island of Isildra which sits in isolation in the Southern Tropical Oceans of Afeli. The nearest significant landfall is over five hundred miles away. Here the flows of magic have interacted with a natural seam of diamonds to create a new gemstone with some unusual properties. Raw Isildran diamonds look just like normal diamonds except for a faint violet glow. They also have a tendancy to catch stray thoughts and images. In the hands of a skilled jeweller, however, one of these magical oddities can become a remarkable artifact.

A memory gem is a piece of jewellery that perfectly records everything its bonded owner – the person it was created for – sees or hears. Almost every Isildran owns one. After all who knows when you might be the victim of a crime or need to prove you did not commit one.

However, remarkable as they are the memory gems have two very big drawbacks that limit their utility.

The first is that an individual can only bond to one gem ever, and secondly in order to extract the memories the stone must be shattered by a jeweller.

For this reason stones are usually only shattered after the Owner's death. Sometimes as part of an autopsy to ascertain the cause of death, and sometimes as part of a funeral ritual so the mourners can share the deceased's memories (more than one family has learnt things they didn't want to as a result of this tradition).

The other common reason for a gem to be shattered is if he owner is accused of a capital crime. The gem will be shattered and the memories observed by the Justices. The owner will be condemned or aquitted by his own memories.

If a ship sails south from Isildra it will, after sailing beneath the shadow of Tarika (the largest of the Sky Islands – a little larger than Britain), eventually reach the Southernmost Islands.

This archipelago straddles the border between the Temperate and Antarctic zones, and at its heart lies Hiral, the third largest island on Afeli. (About the size of India and Madagascar combined).

Hiral's people are magical even by the standards of surface dwelling Afeli, and some have learnt the secret of shifting their shape by bonding with a willing animal (most commonly a wolf but others are not uncommon) which also gains the power to shift.

There are limits however, magic demands balance and harmony. So when one partner is an animal the other must be human and vice versa. Cautionary tales of wily animals trapping their partners in animal form for years while they masqueraded as human abound in Hiral's Folklore. In human settlements strangers are eyed with suspicion lest they not be truly human.

However there is something that concerns the Hirali even more. Something they fear, condemn and try to root out. You see Shifters have a half form that both partners can take at the same time. Sometimes animals and humans 'fraternize' in this form, even though it is a capital crime should it be discovered, and sometimes these unions are fertile. The children share the hybrid form their parents mated in and can breed true with others of their kind. In the forests, mountains and seas of Hiral communities of these beast people thrive inspite of the best efforts of the human Hirali to wipe them out.

Other strange creatures haunt the forests of Hiral and perhaps the strangest of these is the Ekal.

An adult Ekal resembles a large geko in both looks and behaviour, the primary notable difference being the fine layer of fuzz covering its hide making it feel like suede to the touch. Indeed Ekal hide makes a fine leather. However, while Adult Ekal are mostly harmless the species does have a dark and dangerous side. It is only when Ekal mate that the truth is revealed.

The female Ekal digs a hole in the best soil she can find and deposits an egg into it, which the male then fertilizes and buries. The parents then go their seperate ways leaving the egg to develop on its own.

Soon afterwards a green shoot appears from the nest and a plant that resembles a pitcher plant grows, and like the pitcher plant it traps prey to nourish itself though it feeds on magic rather than flesh. The infant Ekal remains a plant for months or even years, and sometimes grows large enough to entrap a human or beastperson. Then, once it has absorbed enough magic from its prey, the pitcher withers away leaving only a corm which is actually a chrysalis from which the adult Ekal emerges.

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Definitely some interesting things to develop further there. I hope you enjoyed reading it.

And if you want to join in next week I'll be taking prompts to develop Afeli further again next Wednesday over on Mastodon. Why not come and join in.

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2014-11-08 02:37 pm

Prompt post 43 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-10-30 11:33 pm

Prompt post 42 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-10-22 09:55 pm

Prompt post 41 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-10-15 09:20 pm

Prompt post 40 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-10-09 12:11 am

Prompt post 39 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-10-01 11:35 pm

Prompt post 38 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-09-25 05:54 pm

Prompt post 37 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-09-18 12:01 am

Prompt post 36 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

I'm not getting comments on the Dreamwidth story posts so I'm going to only post the story posts on my main site from now on. If you have been reading it here you'll still be able to find a link to the story posts via the prompt posts like this.

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2014-09-10 11:47 pm

Prompt post 35 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-09-10 11:43 pm

The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Five

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"Attention, Whisper and escort," came the message from Talis Station. "Please take up a waiting configuration. We have a bit of a situation."

"That doesn't sound good," Amanpreet muttered before responding. "Affirmative, Talis Station. What sort of situation?"

"The fight you were just in with the Vaians seems to have triggered some sort of security protocols in the Talis computer. They have an automated defense system that started up when the first laser was fired. It's not shooting at us because it has us designated as friendly but we think it might fire at anything else that moves."

"So you'd like us to wait until the computer powers it down again?"

"Yes, precisely. It shouldn't be too long once we've given it the data to understand the situation is not a threat to the eggs."

"Make sense," Amanpreet said. "But it's impressive that it still works after so long."

"We could say that about all their technology. I'll call you once it's safe. Talis Station out."

***

It was a couple of hours later that they finally got the all clear from Talis Station and proceed in system from the asteroid belt and docked in the human section of the station. Sangat was waiting for them as soon they disembarked.

"Am!" he said. "Are you okay? That was unnerving."

"We're fine!" Amanpreet hugged her brother. "It was only a short wait, but yes I imagine having a planetary defence system suddenly activate under you is pretty scary."

Sangat stared at her for a moment before shaking his head. "Not that, though it was too. But I meant the Vaians shooting at you!"
"Oh, right," she said. "I'm almost getting used to Vaians trying to kill us by now."

"Used to..." he trailed off and shook his head again. "Anyway I need to go down to the surface. The computer wants to give control of the defence system to us so this doesn't happen again. You can come too as well if you want.”

“Can my guests come as well?” Amanpreet asked. “I think they are curious about Talis.”

“You mean the scientists on the Corona mission?” he asked. “Of course.”

“Can I come too?” Kayla asked before extending her hand to Sangat. “I'm Kayla by the way.”

Sangat smiled at her and shook her hand. “Hi! I'm Am's brother. And of course you can.”

“Thanks,” she said.

“No problem,” he said. “I've heard a lot about you on the news. You've had a rough time.”

“I'll live,” Kayla said.

“I'm sure you will,” he said before turning back to Amanpreet. “You're in the same quarters as last time, Am. Do you want to dump your stuff and meet me back here in half an hour?”

“Sure!”

***

"Woah!" Oni said when they entered the underground city on Talis. "I'd seen the videos of this place but it didn't do it justice. He peeked through the open door of one of the houses. "There's tools of some sort and furniture in there."

"Yes," Sangat said. "We think they intended to shelter here but couldn't manufacture enough shielding. So they protected the eggs and left the city for them instead."

"Remarkable, was this the only shelter?"

"No, the computer has directed us to several others - but only a few of the shelterrs survived. It wants us to swap around the queen eggs to avoid inbreeding."

"It makes sense," Oni agreed. "So where are we going."

"Down another level to where we found the eggs and the computer." Sangat led them into the building where they'd found the book then down a passageway hidden behind the book alcove into a now empty chamber that Amanpreet recognised immediately.

"This is the egg chamber!"

"That's right," Sangat said. "And the central computer is just through here." He led them into the next room where a strange cone shaped structure of layered rock and biological material stood. It must be the computer but it looked like no computer Amanpreet had ever seen. Sangat however began scanning some shelves behind it looking for something."

"There should be a Talisman around here somewhere," he said. "A green toridal one."

"A what?" Amanpreet asked.

"Talisman," Sangat replied. "It's like a chip but looks more like an ornament and they are all different so we nicknamed them Talismans... it's a pun. Talis-man. Talisman."

Amanpreet groaned but didn't comment. Instead she started looking at the shelves as well. After a moment she spotted something that looked like a polished emerald donut. "Is that it?" she asked.

"It is." The noise came from the cone shaped computer and a ole opened on its front. Please place the talisman in the slot."

Amanpreet did as she was instructed and there was a rumbling sound and a beam of light shot upwards through the ceiling in the direction of Talis station. "Control of defences passed to designated allies," it said. "Thank you."

"Good," Sangat said. "Now let's get back and talk about Corona."

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2014-09-03 09:33 pm

Prompt post 34 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

Part 34 is up!

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2014-09-03 09:31 pm

The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Four

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"We've just entered that central void in the Spaghetti where our sensors and similar work," Niobe said. "And our escort and Promise are both hailing us."

"Put them on screen," Amanpreet said.

"Okay," Niobe said. A moment later the escort captain appeared on the screen.

"This is quite extraordinary," he said. "I knew you'd described it but I thought you must be exaggerating. We may have to ask Promise and his people if they will be willing to construct nests like this elsewhere in hyperspace. They could make travel a lot safer."

"It's possible we would," Promise said. "But right now we need to discuss our prisoners. They tried to attack me after I swallowed them."

"Damn!" Amanpreet exclaimed. "Are you okay? Did they hurt you?"

"I'm fine, but they are not happy with the restraints I used on their ship. The trouble with knowing their language is I know they are swearing at me. I'd like to evict them soon."

"Once we get to Talis," Amanpreet said. "Even a small station like that has a brig. They can send them to Aletheia for trial."

“So what did it taste like?” The captain said.

“Hmm?” Promise said. “Oh, the ship. I don't actually have a sense of taste like you do. We use hyperspace radiation for energy.”

“Yes, that's quite a trick,” Vanna said. “The non-sophont Fish do it too and the Mez won't share how they engineered it. Oddly they claim they didn't.”

“That's true, they didn't,” Promise said. “They discovered by accident that a sub-sophont species on their homeworld somehow had the ability even though it was useless to a creature that couldn't enter hyperspace and they used that as one of our progenitors.”

Vanna leaned across her console, eyes afire with speculation. “That's interesting considering how vulnerable the Mez and most other species on their homeworld are to hyperspace radiation. I'll have to talk to Umi and Storm, because the only thing I can imagine is that the non-sophont species was descended from a sophont species.”

“It's an interesting speculation,” the captain said. “But for now we need to plan where to emerge from the Spaghetti.”

“As near to Talis as possible,” Promise said. “And my people will escort you all and capture any more ships that attack us. If there are several of us I doubt they will.”

“Excellent! Thank you for your help,” he said.

“Amanpreet and her friends are my friends,” Promise said. “I think the bigger problem is how we get to Corona and back safely.”

“Yes, we'll discuss that at Talis,” the captain said. “So what restraints do you have on the prisoners.”

“I'll show you.” Promise said. An image appeared on the screen of the Vaian ship in a cavernous space somewhere inside Promise. The stick was encased in some kind of black goop. “Don't worry it won't hurt them.”

“Goodness me!” the captain said. “We have a Fish, we have spaghetti, and now we have sauce. This mission is making me hungry.” He gave a wry grin. “But more seriously we need to get to Talis as soon as possible. I need to file a report about this. I haven't found my traitor yet and the Council needs warning that Vaian influence apparently extends further than we thought if they have spies on our ships.”

“That's a good idea,” Amanpreet agreed. “Let's cut contact until we get back into normal space.”

***

Several hours later they emerged from Hyperspace just beyond the Talis system's Kupier belt and headed inwards towards Talis. Almost immediately two Vaian sticks also emerged from hyperspace and came shooting towards them, lasers already firing. As the Whisper swerved out of the way Amanpreet stared at the screen in disbelief.

“They're attacking us in normal space in range of a station? Are they stupid?”

“Desperate I think,” Kayla said. “They must really want me dead and they knew they couldn't win in hyperspace after our first encounter. They're hoping being able to use their weapons will even the field.”

“It won't.” Promise's voice was soothing as it came over the speakers. "Run for the station, your escorts and my people will deal with them.”

“Do as Promise says,” the captain said.

“Okay,” Amanpreet said. “Niobe keep the line open and the battle on the screen.”

“Of course, Am.”

Amanpreet kept her eyes on the screen as the ship flew towards Talis and safety. Their escorts and the Fish were all over the Vaian ships and also using their weaponry. She tilted her head as an odd energy discharge that wasn't quite a laser emerged from one of the Fish's heads and struck one of the enemy. It didn't appear to damage the Stick but it seemed to be incapacitated and another of the Fish swallowed it the way Promise had grabbed the one in hyperspace.

The crew of the remaining Vaian ship obviously realised they had been beaten because they turned tail and fled, disappearing into hyperspace. Two of the Fish also vanished.

“It's making a run for it!” Promise said. “My fellows will chase them down and bring them back.”

“Thank you,” Amanpreet said. “But warn them to be careful. Human weapons tend to be more powerful than Mez ones. Now let's get to Talis base. They'll have been watching and worrying.”

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2014-08-27 11:35 pm

Prompt post 33 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

Part 33 is up!

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2014-08-27 11:18 pm

The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Three

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Amanpreet took a breath to steady herself. "Can you call our escort and Promise, please, Niobe? We need to discuss what to do."

"You know the spy is probably on our escort don't you?" Niobe said. "The captain was the one who picked our route to try and avoid just this."

"I know," Amanpreet said. "And hopefully he does as well and has locked down communication." She frowned to herself. "But let's check our own communications, just in case. I trust all of you but we do have guests aboard."

"That's a good point," Niobe said. "I'll check but I don't think they know our route."

"Better safe than sorry," Amanpreet said. "Please put them on screen and translate for Promise will you."

"Of course," Niobe said. "Though I've been teaching Promise several languages and it's very quick so it may understand anyway. Storm says the original Fish were designed to learn fast."

"Yes, I suppose they would need to," Amanpreet said then straightened as the captain of her escort appeared on one half of the viewscreen and an external shot of Promise on the other.

"Ah, Captain Amanpreet," the escort captain said. "I guess you've seen the message then. I'm trying to pin down who betrayed us but our logs show no outbound messages from any of my ships after I decided which route to take." His eyes narrowed. "Of course I know there were legitimate outbound messages after that so it seems our spy is clumsy. I'm taking this communication privately – so if the Vaians act on it I'll now we've been bugged.”

"I see," Amanpreet said. "I've got Niobe checking our outbound messages as well."

"Good," he said. "But I'm sure the problem is on our end. But now we have a major problem - what do we do now? They're obviously waiting for us."

"I actually have a suggestion," Amanpreet said. "We're not far from the Transit so let's cut through the Spaghetti. I doubt they'll dare follow us in there." She hesitated. "Assuming Promise doesn't mind. The Spaghetti is Fish territory."

"You'll be welcome." The soft musical voice made Amanpreet jump. "And once we re-enter hyperspace I will call my fellows to make sure your enemies stay out."

"Uh..." Amanpreet realised her mouth was open. "Promise?"

"Yes," it replied. "Niobe has been teaching me your languages so I don't need a translator."

"It certainly makes things easier," the escort captain said. "And going through the Spaghetti Transit is a good idea-" He paused and laughed. "My navigator will not agree when I tell her, I'm afraid. But I've been thinking I would like to put up some more interesting challenges soon for her. She's way too cocky sometimes."

"Tell them not to worry," Promise said. "I'll make a path for you."

“Thank you,” he said. “I'll tell her. And we'll do that... no one will follow us in there...” He hesitated. “But if they realise where we have gone they'll be waiting when we emerge. We can probably win a fight but I'd rather not have one.”

“I'll get some of my fellows to escort us,” Promise said. “They'll surely not attack us then.”

“An excellent idea,” the escort captain said. “But we'll have to discuss our next move as well because they surely know we're heading to Corona.”

“Yes, that is a problem,” Amanpreet agreed. “But let's get to Talis safely first.”

“Of course,” he said.

***

They had only been back in hyperspace for half an hour when Kane's voice came over the intercom.

"Hell! They found us!" He exclaimed. "They must have been waiting for us. Our escort are blocking them so I'm running for the Spaghetti-" He gave a startled exclamation. "Promise just ate one of the Vaian ships! What's it thinking?"

"That we should capture them if we can, I imagine," Kayla said. "I think it's right. How many are there?"

"Just one now," he said. "And we'll be in the Spaghetti in the next few minutes." There was a long pause then he said. "The remaining ship has broken off - must have realised where we are going. Our escort is joining us." He gave a sigh. "This job isn't supposed to be this exciting, Am."

"Tell me about it," Amanpreet muttered. "But at least we are safe for now. I'll be glad to get to Talis."


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2014-08-20 11:36 pm

Prompt post 32 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

Part 32 is up!

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2014-08-20 11:31 pm

The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Two

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The bioforming supplies were delivered early the next morning and Amanpreet and Niobe checked the inventory while Linda cooked them breakfast.

"It looks like everything is here," Amanpreet said finally. "Let's get it stowed, eat breakfast, and then set off." She glanced at Niobe. "Or do you want to stay a few more hours? I know you don't see your mother as much as you'd like."

"It's fine," Niobe said. "I won't say I wouldn't like to stay longer bur I know we need to get moving and Mum does as well. We've already lost time so we shouldn't make any unnecessary delays so we have some flexibility for necessary ones."

Amanpreet looked at Niobe for a long moment then nodded. "Well, if you're sure."

"I am," Niobe said. "Come on, let's get this loaded. I'm starving."

***

Their escort was waiting when the Whisper re-entered orbit and rendezvoused with Promise. Amanpreet couldn't help blinking when she saw the four state of the art military sticks on the viewscreen.

"They must really be worried about the Vaian Military who escaped," she said.

"It certainly looks like it," Niobe agreed. "Ah! They're hailing us." She listened to the message and nodded. "They're sending us data for a slightly roundabout route to Talis because the Vaians have been hitting hyperspace traffic on the normal routes." She pursed her lips. "And bad news - they think there is a leak somewhere and they are specifically looking for Kayla because they are boarding the ships they intercept--"

"Boarding? In hyperspace?" Kayla exclaimed. "Don't they know how dangerous that is? Are they stupid?"

"Apparently, yes," Niobe said. "But as I was saying they are boarding the ships, searching them - looking for someone or something - and then letting them go. Though they are also stealing any cargo that's aboard."

"That certainly sounds like they are looking for Kayla," Amanpreet agreed. "But they are going to get themselves and their victims killed or worse doing that."

“Yes,” Niobe agreed. “But so far they have a ridiculous pattern of good luck. No ships are missing.”

"That's good at least," Amanpreet said. "Kane, I want you to take the first navigation run so check the route from the message."

"Okay, Am." He headed for the ladder to the dome.

***

Eight hours later they dropped out of hyperspace to change navigators and check for any message packets.

As Mark was climbing into the dome Niobe gave a groan and buried her face in her hands. Kane, who had already climbed down rushed over to her and rubbed her shoulder.

"What wrong, Niobe?" he asked softly.

"I- I hate to break the pattern," Niobe said weakly. "But a Celish freighter enroute to Talis didn't arrive this morning. They sent out a search and found it - or the remains of it anyway - together with a much less damaged but still unusable Vaian ship in hyperspace not far out. It was clearly a botched boarding attempt from the nature of the damage. They've accounted for the bodies of the freighter crew but not the Vaians and there's evidence they might have been rescued."

"Mother of the living!" Amanpreet shuddered. Hyperspace exposure was no way to die. "H-how many?"

"A crew of twelve," Niobe said. "And no survivors." She raised her head finally and punched the console in front of her. "Damn them! They would have had time to rescue them if they'd tried. She took a breath and listened to the rest of the packet before groaning again. "And there's... well not worse news, but news that makes this worse for us. The freighter was travelling the same alternative route as we are." She shook her head. "That means there is definitely a leak somewhere. What do we do now?"
 

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2014-08-13 11:37 pm

Prompt post 31 The Whisper of Damkina (Space Opera)

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2014-08-13 11:34 pm

The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty One

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By the time Kayla arrived, dinner was nearly ready and wonderful smells were floating into the house from the outdoor kitchen that Niobe's family used at the hottest times of the year. Amanpreet was sitting at the terminal checking on the order for the bioforming supplies for Talis, so she twisted around in her seat to look at her.

"How did it go?" she asked.

"Without a hitch," Kayla said. "I have new ID and the Dreamsong is now officially mine." She flopped down on one of the sofas. "And no one attacked me, which is nice. But what happens now? I hope the wait soon will be over."

"Well, now we wait for the bioforming supplies then head off to Talis to deliver them and pick up the scientists," Amanpreet said. "And the bioforming supplies should be ready tomorrow."

"Excellent," Oni said. "We'll be at Corona in plenty of time then."

"You know the date?" Linda asked as she re-entered the house and waved them towards the dining table. She was carrying a large pot and Niobe was behind her with others. “This one's fish stew and Niobe's is similar but made with tofu.”

"Yes," he said. "Several of the highland cultures have had radio for some time and we've been listening to them. Our linguists have decoded enough of their languages to understand their calendar and some of their technological terms. That's how we know they are planning to send their first astronauts up."

Niobe's eyes lit up. “I want to talk to your linguists! I've always wanted to work on an unknown language. It must be challenging,”

“Sure!” One of the other members of Oni's group – a young woman with dark olive skin and short black hair – said. “It's always nice to have input from a colleague.” She extended her hand to Niobe across the table. “I'm Sierra by the way, the team's chief linguist, and yes it's very challenging – especially since we don't have enough comparatives - but yes, it's extremely rewarding. Speaking of unknown languages, I want to grab the lexicon the linguists are building for the Talis species while we're there.” She rolled her eyes skywards. “I wish we had a helpful telepathic computer to help us at Corona.”

“It would be useful,” Nerrin said. “But we don't even know if it's fully safe yet, even if Am does seem unharmed. Though given the warning they had to give us and what we've now learned about Corona it seems reasonable.”

“That's true,” Sierra said.

“What did you learn today?” Kayla asked.

“Oh!” Niobe said. “We haven't told you that bit yet. The alien species that attacked Talis was also responsible for the destruction of Corona's former Class Four species, as we feared. Am is thinking they target species that have or are close to having to hyperspace travel capability.”

“Really?” Kayla said. “Why would they... do you think that maybe their home is in hyperspace like the Fish's home?”

Amanpreet blinked at that then shook her head. “No, rather the opposite. From what we know they can't actually tolerate hyperspace at all.”

Kayla gave a whistle. “They must be immortal then. How would you hold an interstellar society together at sublight speeds otherwise?”

“Extremely long lived at the very least,” Amanpreet agreed. “But to hold a society together unchanged for hundreds of thousands of years they'd need to be, even without the hyperspace thing.” She chewed on her lip. “Two hundred thousand years... even if they have a generation period of one thousand years that's two hundred generations. Look how much humans have changed in two hundred generations.”

Kayla nodded thoughtfully. “A lot of social inertia as well. I hope we never have to fight them.”

“Me too,” Amanpreet said. “But the Council needs to plan as if we will.”

“I'm sure they will,” Linda said. “That's their job after all.” She turned to Oni. “So tell me more about Corona and your work.”

“Ah yes,” he said. “Corona is interesting because it has two closely related sophont species and the highland species is one of the technologically developed we study.”

“They are geographically discrete?” she asked.

“Yes, the highland species cannot tolerate the atmosphere at low levels. They developed powered flight very early on from what we can tell because of this. I'm writing a paper on them currently. I can send you a copy if you wish.”

“I'd like that,” she said. “So will you stay tonight before you go to Talis and Corona?”

“Sure!” Niobe said before Amanpreet could answer. “We have to wait for the stuff for the Ishtari anyway.”

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